Merge pull request #600 from thegreenwebfoundation/hs-directory-impro…

…ve-listing-text WIP: Rewrite “Help improve this listing” text in the Directory
thegreenwebfoundation · Jul 9, 2024 · 670c336 · 670c336
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diff --git a/apps/theme/templates/greencheck/partials/_directory_beta-msg.html b/apps/theme/templates/greencheck/partials/_directory_beta-msg.html
@@ -1,8 +1,7 @@
 <div class="flex items-center grow justify-end gap-2 text-right min-[520px]:block min-[520px]:grow-0 min-[520px]:text-center">
 
-	<p class="text-xs min-[520px]:mb-2">Be kind, we're still in</p>
+	<p class="text-xs min-[530px]:mb-2">🙏 Be kind, we're still in</p>
 	<p class="uppercase py-2 px-5 border-2 border-black rounded-3xl text-sm font-bold">beta</p>
-	<p class="text-xs min-[520px]:mt-2"><a href="https://www.thegreenwebfoundation.org/directory/">Previous Directory</a></p>
 
 </div>
 
diff --git a/apps/theme/templates/greencheck/partials/_directory_results.html b/apps/theme/templates/greencheck/partials/_directory_results.html
@@ -53,13 +53,6 @@ <h4 class="inline-block mb-0 font-bold text-xl">
                             {% for service in obj.services.all %}
                                 <li class="service-label inline-block">{{ service.name }}</li>
                             {% endfor %}
-
-                            {% comment %}
-									Every host in our directory used to at least offer shared hosting.
-									Below is a placeholder to see how it would look with live data.
-									{% else %}
-									<li class="service-label inline-block">Compute: Shared Hosting for Websites</li>
-								{% endcomment %}
                         </ul>
                     {% endif %}
 
@@ -87,27 +80,28 @@ <h4 class="inline-block mb-0 font-bold text-xl">
 
                 </div>
 
-                {% if not obj.public_supporting_evidence and not obj.description %}
-                    <details class="">
-                        <summary class="text-right text-sm text-neutral-400">Help improve this listing</summary>
-
-                        <p class="max-w-xs md:max-w-md text-sm text-justify ml-auto mr-0 mt-2 text-neutral-400">
-                            Once a hosting provider gets verified with us, we ask them to keep
-                            their listing up to date and refresh their evidence at least annually.</p>
-
-                        <p class="max-w-xs md:max-w-md text-sm text-justify ml-auto mr-0 mt-2 text-neutral-400">
-                            <span class="text-neutral-500">Are you a customer of this provider?</span> We find
-                            it helps most providers act more quickly if they receive a friendly prompt
-                            from you reminding them of the importance of this open data. Use our
-                            <a target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer" href="https://www.thegreenwebfoundation.org/sample-emails/">
-                                sample emails</a> to start a conversation.</p>
-
-                        <p class="max-w-xs md:max-w-md text-sm text-justify ml-auto mr-0 mt-2 text-neutral-400">
-                            <span class="text-neutral-500">Do you work for this provider?</span>
-                            <a target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer" href="https://www.thegreenwebfoundation.org/support-form/?wpf2192_9=Update a listing in the Green Web Directory">
-                                Submit a correction</a> now.</p>
-
-                {% endif %}
+                <details class="">
+                    <summary class="text-right text-sm text-neutral-400">Think this data could be improved?</summary>
+
+                    <p class="max-w-xs md:max-w-md text-sm text-justify ml-auto mr-0 mt-2 text-neutral-400">
+                        We work with hosting providers to ensure the data shown here is correct 
+                        on submission, refreshed at least annually and made public. But like any dataset, 
+                        this data requires tending. 
+                         <a target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer" 
+                         href="https://www.thegreenwebfoundation.org/support/i-think-theres-an-error-in-the-green-web-dataset-what-can-i-do/">
+                         It can become incorrect</a> over time. That's when a little people power makes all the difference!</p>
+
+                    <p class="max-w-xs md:max-w-md text-sm text-justify ml-auto mr-0 mt-2 text-neutral-400">
+                        <span class="text-neutral-500">Customers of this provider</span> - 
+                        a request coming from a customer to update the information visible here usually carries more weight than one coming from us.
+                        Use our
+                        <a target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer" href="https://www.thegreenwebfoundation.org/sample-emails/">
+                            sample emails</a> to start a conversation.</p>
+
+                    <p class="max-w-xs md:max-w-md text-sm text-justify ml-auto mr-0 mt-2 text-neutral-400">
+                        <span class="text-neutral-500">Provider staff</span> - 
+                        <a target="_blank" rel="noopener noreferrer" href="https://www.thegreenwebfoundation.org/support-form/?wpf2192_9=Update a listing in the Green Web Directory">
+                            submit a correction</a>.</p>
 
             </article>