Threefold guides #76
Threefold guides #76
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Mik-TF
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AhmedHanafy725,
ashraffouda,
mohamedamer453 and
xmonader
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@AhmedHanafy725 Can you check this pull request please? Also, the reviewers haven't approved yet this PR but I have the option on my side to merge it. Thanks! |
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Everything looks good I've only found and commented on a couple of things that could be improved but other than that everything else is great.
I've also wanted to mention that i tried these guides while reviewing and they're really useful and easy to follow. Great Work!
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| ## Conclusion | ||
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| You now have access to a web-based graphical interface to manage your 3node. Read [Cockpit's documentation](https://cockpit-project.org/documentation.html) to explore further this interface. |
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manage your 3node
Shouldn't it be VM instead of 3node? since it might be falsely understood that this guide gives you an interface to manage the node itself.
| . /etc/os-release && sudo apt install -t ${UBUNTU_CODENAME}-backports cockpit -y | ||
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| * Access Cokcpit on a web browser: | ||
| * Write the following URL with the 3node IP address: |
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same as the comment mentioned below i think it should be changed to VM ip address or 3node VM ip address
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| ## Introduction | ||
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| In this guide, we deploy a full virtual machine (Ubuntu 20.04) on the Threefold Grid with IPv4. We install and run [Apache Guacamole](https://guacamole.apache.org/) and access the 3node server with remote desktop connection by using [xrdp](https://www.xrdp.org/). |
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Same comment as above for the 3node naming should be applied in the following lines:
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| * Deploy a Full VM (Ubuntu 20.04) | ||
| * IPv4 Address | ||
| * After deployment, copy the IPv4 address | ||
| * To SSH into the 3node, write in the terminal |
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Same comment as above for the 3node naming should be applied in the following lines:
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| @@ -47,6 +47,10 @@ The main steps for the whole process are the following: | |||
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| ### SSH into a 3node with IPv4 on Linux | |||
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Same comment as above for the 3node naming should be applied in the following lines:
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| In this Threefold Guide, we show how easy it is to deploy a full VM and access Cockpit, a web-based interface to manage servers. For more information on Cockpit, visit this [link](https://cockpit-project.org/). | ||
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| For more information on deploying a Full VM and using SSH remote connection, read [this SSH guide](https://www2.manual.grid.tf/getstarted/ssh_guide/ssh_guide.html). |
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I have a question about the links of the docs. since these guides are the same project and repo, i think it would be better if we could redirect to it internally like this ../../tfgrid3_getstarted.md instead of adding an external link for the docs. or are these links added like this for a specifics reason?
this comment should also be applied for the links in the following lines: 18, 24,
| This guide can be done on a Windows, MAC, or Linux computer. For more information on deploying a Full VM and using SSH remote connection, read this [SSH guide](https://www2.manual.grid.tf/getstarted/ssh_guide/ssh_guide.html). | ||
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| If you are new to the Threefold ecosystem and you want to deploy workloads on the Threefold Grid, read the [Get Started section](https://www2.manual.grid.tf/getstarted/tfgrid3_getstarted.html) of the Threefold Manual. |
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Same comment as mentioned above for the links
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| ### SSH into the 3nodes | ||
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| * To [SSH into the 3nodes](https://www2.manual.grid.tf/getstarted/ssh_guide/ssh_guide.html), write the following: |
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Same comment as mentioned above for the links
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@mohamedamer453 I changed 3node for VM throughout, to avoid confusion. I also set the proper inner links instead of the hyperlinks. I will merge the PR. |
In this pull request:
The guides were first shared on the TF Forum.
@xmonader
Thanks!