Merge pull request #761 from ludwigbald/trynow

Cleaning up try now page
matrix-org · Jun 2, 2020 · 5024eee · 5024eee
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diff --git a/gatsby/src/pages/try-now.js b/gatsby/src/pages/try-now.js
@@ -14,11 +14,24 @@ const TryNow = () => {
             <MXContentMain>
             <div class="mxblock mxblock--try">
                 <h1 class="mxblock--try__hx">Try Now</h1>
-                <p class="mxblock--try__p">The easiest way to try Matrix is to use the <a href="https://about.riot.im/" rel="noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">Riot Web</a> client in your browser, which is configured by default to connect to the matrix.org homeserver.</p>
-
-                <img src="/images/riot-ensemble.png" width="1120" srcset="/images/riot-ensemble-p-500.png 500w, /images/riot-ensemble-p-800.png 800w, /images/riot-ensemble-p-1080.png 1080w, /images/riot-ensemble.png 1803w" sizes="(max-width: 479px) 96vw, (max-width: 767px) 97vw, (max-width: 991px) 95vw, 800px" alt="" class="mxblock--try__img" />
-
-                <a href="https://about.riot.im/" rel="noopener noreferrer" target="_blank" class="mxblock__btn mxblock--hero__btn mxblock--hero_btn--try w-button">Go to Riot.im</a>
+                <p class="mxblock--try_p">
+                  In order to communicate through matrix, you need to chose a client,
+                  register an account on a homeserver, and join a room.
+                  While your account is tied to your homeserver, you can switch to a different client later,
+                  so go and have a play!
+                </p>
+                <p class="mxblock--try__p">
+                  The easiest way to try Matrix is to use
+                  the <a href="https://about.riot.im/" rel="noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">Riot Web</a> client
+                  in your browser, which is configured by default to connect to the matrix.org homeserver.
+                </p>
+
+                <a href="https://about.riot.im/" rel="noopener noreferrer" target="_blank">
+                  <img src="/images/riot-ensemble.png" width="1120" srcset="/images/riot-ensemble-p-500.png 500w, /images/riot-ensemble-p-800.png 800w, /images/riot-ensemble-p-1080.png 1080w, /images/riot-ensemble.png 1803w" sizes="(max-width: 479px) 96vw, (max-width: 767px) 97vw, (max-width: 991px) 95vw, 800px" alt="" class="mxblock--try__img" />
+                </a>
+                <a href="https://about.riot.im/" rel="noopener noreferrer" target="_blank" class="mxblock__btn mxblock--hero__btn mxblock--hero_btn--try w-button">
+                  Start Riot Web
+                </a>
 
                 <p class="mxblock--try__p">Alternatively, you can find more clients and servers in <a href="/docs/projects/try-matrix-now">Discover</a>.</p>
             </div>