Fix persisting-state spelling and grammar

app/quick-start/persisting-state/markdown.ts

@@ -1,14 +1,14 @@
 export const markdown = `
 # Persisting state value
 
-In this lesson, we take a look at how we can persist the state value to \`localStorage\` with jotai \`atoms\`.
-Persisting states to the \`localStorage\` can be challenging, maybe you want to persist user's preferences or data to hand them to users on thier next session.
+In this lesson, we will take a look at how we can persist the state value to \`localStorage\` with jotai \`atoms\`.
+Persisting state to \`localStorage\` can be challenging. You might want to persist the user's preferences or data for their next session.
 
 Jotai \`atomWithStorage\` is a special kind of atom that automatically syncs the value provided to it with localstorage or sessionStorage, and picks the value upon the first load automatically. It's available in the \`jotai/utils\` module.
 To persist our theme atom simply create it with the \`atomWithStorage\` atom.
 ~~~js
 const theme = atomWithStorage('dark', false)
 ~~~
 
-Now, when you reload the preview section of editor you see that the theme matches with the value before the page reloads.
+Now, when you reload the preview section of the editor you will see that the theme matches the value from before the page reload.
 `;