diff --git a/draft-ietf-privacypass-architecture.md b/draft-ietf-privacypass-architecture.md index fe901564..b1c89050 100755 --- a/draft-ietf-privacypass-architecture.md +++ b/draft-ietf-privacypass-architecture.md @@ -100,7 +100,7 @@ in a privacy-preserving way, i.e., without learning any unique, per-client information through the authentication protocol, and then make authorization decisions on the basis of that authentication suceeding or failing. Possible authorization decisions might be to provide clients with read access to a -particular resource or write access to a particular API. +particular resource or write access to a particular resource. Typical approaches for authorizing clients, such as through the use of long-term state (cookies), are not privacy-friendly since they allow servers to track