From 1b412a92a6a027bd07c4534aa301fb2a2c36c5e1 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Aurian Date: Sat, 6 Apr 2024 02:14:44 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] typo fixes #208 --- Update/onik_002.txt | 2 +- Update/onik_004.txt | 2 +- Update/onik_005.txt | 10 +++++----- Update/onik_009.txt | 12 ++++++------ Update/onik_009_02.txt | 2 +- Update/onik_010.txt | 4 ++-- Update/onik_011.txt | 2 +- Update/onik_012.txt | 2 +- Update/onik_013.txt | 6 +++--- Update/onik_014.txt | 8 ++++---- Update/onik_014_02.txt | 10 +++++----- Update/onik_015.txt | 12 ++++++------ Update/onik_015_02.txt | 2 +- Update/onik_015_03.txt | 6 +++--- Update/onik_tips_01.txt | 2 +- Update/onik_tips_02.txt | 2 +- Update/onik_tips_03.txt | 2 +- Update/onik_tips_04.txt | 9 +-------- Update/onik_tips_07.txt | 2 +- Update/onik_tips_09.txt | 8 ++------ Update/onik_tips_10.txt | 8 +------- Update/onik_tips_20.txt | 2 +- Update/zonik_004_vm00_n01.txt | 10 +++++----- Update/zonik_004_vm0x_n01.txt | 2 +- Update/zonik_014_vm00_n01.txt | 4 ++-- Update/zonik_014_vm0x_n01.txt | 4 ++-- Update/zonik_tips_20_vm00_n01.txt | 2 +- Update/zonik_tips_20_vm0x_n01.txt | 2 +- 28 files changed, 61 insertions(+), 78 deletions(-) diff --git a/Update/onik_002.txt b/Update/onik_002.txt index ede20357..41ec41ba 100644 --- a/Update/onik_002.txt +++ b/Update/onik_002.txt @@ -1881,7 +1881,7 @@ void main() if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("レナ", NULL, "Rena", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 2, "ps3/s19/02/990200117", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "「かぁいいかぁいい！！", - NULL, "\"Kyuuuteee!!", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "\"Kyuuute!!", Line_WaitForInput); ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 2, "ps3/s19/02/990200118", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "……沙都子ちゃんもかぁいい…よぅ…☆……お持ち帰り…はぅ！」", NULL, " ...Satoko is so... kyute...☆ ...take you home...hau!\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); diff --git a/Update/onik_004.txt b/Update/onik_004.txt index da5555b9..bd166cbe 100644 --- a/Update/onik_004.txt +++ b/Update/onik_004.txt @@ -1863,7 +1863,7 @@ void main() NULL, " ...What is it? What is it!?", Line_WaitForInput); ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 2, "ps3/s19/02/990200247", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "　…えぇ…？！」", - NULL, " ...Haoh...!?\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); + NULL, " ...Hauu...!?\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } diff --git a/Update/onik_005.txt b/Update/onik_005.txt index 3754ef29..8c019959 100644 --- a/Update/onik_005.txt +++ b/Update/onik_005.txt @@ -259,7 +259,7 @@ void main() if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("レナ", NULL, "Rena", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 2, "ps3/s19/02/990200308", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "「……うん、かぁいいよ……はぅ……ほしぃよぅ……。」", - NULL, "\"...Yeah, kyute... hao... I want it...\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); + NULL, "\"...Yeah, kyute... hau... I want it...\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); DisableWindow(); ModDrawCharacter(1, 4, "sprite/sa1a_akireru_a1_", "0", -160, 0, 0, FALSE, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 0, 200, TRUE ); @@ -1663,7 +1663,7 @@ void main() //えぇッ？！＠ OutputLine(NULL, "えぇッ？！」", - NULL, " Haoh!?\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); + NULL, " Hauu!?\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } @@ -2238,7 +2238,7 @@ void main() if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("レナ", NULL, "Rena", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 2, "ps3/s19/02/990200344", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "「は…はぅ……。", - NULL, "\"Ha... hao...", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "\"Ha... hau...", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLine(NULL, "…はい", NULL, " okay", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 2, "ps3/s19/02/990200345", 256, TRUE); @@ -2934,7 +2934,7 @@ void main() // (backup) SetValidityOfInput( TRUE ); OutputLine(NULL, "はぅ…", - NULL, " hao...", Line_Continue); + NULL, " hau...", Line_Continue); // (backup) SetValidityOfInput( FALSE ); Wait( 300 ); @@ -4011,7 +4011,7 @@ void main() if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("圭一", NULL, "Keiichi", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 1, "ps3/s19/01/hr_kei07940", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "「ぇ、ええ？！？！", - NULL, "\"H-Haouh!?!?", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "\"H-Hauuu!?!?", Line_WaitForInput); ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 1, "ps3/s19/01/hr_kei07950", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "　それ女子用だろッ？！", NULL, " This is for girls!?", Line_WaitForInput); diff --git a/Update/onik_009.txt b/Update/onik_009.txt index 70af13dd..2cdaa7cb 100644 --- a/Update/onik_009.txt +++ b/Update/onik_009.txt @@ -360,7 +360,7 @@ void main() if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("レナ", NULL, "Rena", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 2, "ps3/s19/02/500200786", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "「はぅ！……はいおばさま〜〜〜！", - NULL, "\"Hao!... Yes, Ma'am~~~!", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "\"Hau!... Yes, Ma'am~~~!", Line_WaitForInput); ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 2, "ps3/s19/02/500200787", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "　圭一くんはレナが命に替えましても〜☆」", NULL, " Even if it means I must sacrifice myself~.☆\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); @@ -1050,7 +1050,7 @@ void main() if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("圭一", NULL, "Keiichi", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 1, "ps3/s19/01/hr_kei33670", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "「おっしゃあぁああッ！！」", - NULL, "\"Haoriiight!!\"", Line_Normal); + NULL, "\"Hauuriiight!!\"", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); DisableWindow(); @@ -1688,7 +1688,7 @@ void main() if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("梨花", NULL, "Rika", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 5, "ps3/s19/05/500500289", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "「…もう見つけてありますです。…圭一もですね？」", - NULL, "\"...We've already found it. ...Keiichi, too?\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); + NULL, "\"...I've already found it. ...Keiichi, too?\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } @@ -2539,7 +2539,7 @@ void main() NULL, "\"Gasp!?", Line_WaitForInput); ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 2, "ps3/s19/02/500200835", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "　……はぅ、なんだ魅ぃちゃんかぁ……はぅ…。」", - NULL, " ...Hao, oh it's Mii-chan... hau...\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); + NULL, " ...Hau, oh it's Mii-chan... hau...\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } @@ -2690,7 +2690,7 @@ void main() // (backup) SetValidityOfInput( TRUE ); OutputLine(NULL, "　えぇ？！", - NULL, " Haoh!?", Line_Continue); + NULL, " Hauu!?", Line_Continue); // (backup) SetValidityOfInput( FALSE ); Wait( 200 ); @@ -6426,7 +6426,7 @@ void main() if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("魅音", NULL, "Mion", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 3, "ps3/s19/03/500300769", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "「はぅ〜、の「は」と「ぅ」の間くらいだったか…", - NULL, "\"Between the 'ha' and 'o' of her hau~ I...", Line_Continue); + NULL, "\"Between the 'ha' and 'u' of her hau~ I...", Line_Continue); // (backup) SetValidityOfInput( FALSE ); Wait( 300 ); diff --git a/Update/onik_009_02.txt b/Update/onik_009_02.txt index 08a1d72e..c28509ba 100644 --- a/Update/onik_009_02.txt +++ b/Update/onik_009_02.txt @@ -1383,7 +1383,7 @@ void main() if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("圭一", NULL, "Keiichi", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 1, "ps3/s01/01/120100022", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "「………………。」", - NULL, "\"....\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); + NULL, "\"...\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } diff --git a/Update/onik_010.txt b/Update/onik_010.txt index 422d5361..a0c8779c 100644 --- a/Update/onik_010.txt +++ b/Update/onik_010.txt @@ -411,7 +411,7 @@ void main() //　今度は俺も、黙っている側の人間なのだ￥ if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } OutputLine(NULL, "　今度は俺も、黙っている側の人間なのだ。", - NULL, "And now, I was one of ones who needed to keep their mouths shut.", Line_Normal); + NULL, "And now, I was one of the ones who needed to keep their mouths shut.", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); @@ -1811,7 +1811,7 @@ void main() //　その中を、暑そうに小脇にジャケットを抱え、だらしなくネクタイを緩めた中年のおっさんが待ち受けていた￥ if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } OutputLine(NULL, "　その中を、暑そうに小脇にジャケットを抱え、だらしなくネクタイを緩めた中年のおっさんが待ち受けていた。", - NULL, "Waiting there, looking uncomfortably warm, was a middle-aged man, his tie sloppily loosened, and his jacket tucked underneath his arm..", Line_Normal); + NULL, "Waiting there, looking uncomfortably warm, was a middle-aged man, his tie sloppily loosened, and his jacket tucked underneath his arm...", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); diff --git a/Update/onik_011.txt b/Update/onik_011.txt index a29cc405..997a15ea 100644 --- a/Update/onik_011.txt +++ b/Update/onik_011.txt @@ -2218,7 +2218,7 @@ void main() NULL, " It has to be.", Line_WaitForInput); ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 2, "ps3/s01/02/120200094", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "レナも最初、そうだったから。", - NULL, " Rena was also like that at first, too.", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, " I was also like that at first, too.", Line_WaitForInput); ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 2, "ps3/s01/02/120200095", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "わかるんだよ？", NULL, " I can tell, you know?", Line_Continue); diff --git a/Update/onik_012.txt b/Update/onik_012.txt index 2811dc09..f070e071 100644 --- a/Update/onik_012.txt +++ b/Update/onik_012.txt @@ -1057,7 +1057,7 @@ void main() if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("圭一", NULL, "Keiichi", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 1, "ps3/s01/01/120100278", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "「あの、…漫画なんかによくあるじゃないですか。", - NULL, "\"Um... you know that thing you see in comics all the time?", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "\"Um... you know that thing you see in manga all the time?", Line_WaitForInput); ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 1, "ps3/s01/01/120100279", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "体内に取り込まれると分解したりして、証拠が何も残らないなんて、そんな薬…。」", NULL, " Where there's a drug that doesn't leave any traces after being consumed...\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); diff --git a/Update/onik_013.txt b/Update/onik_013.txt index 6f22cb84..fc533474 100644 --- a/Update/onik_013.txt +++ b/Update/onik_013.txt @@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ void main() //　まだ深夜の１時か２時だと思っていた＠ if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } OutputLine(NULL, "　まだ深夜の１時か２時だと思っていた。", - NULL, "I thought it was still 1 or 2 AM.", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); + NULL, "I thought it was still 1 or 2am.", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } @@ -1850,7 +1850,7 @@ void main() OutputLine(NULL, "　彼らは見て見ぬふりをしてたんじゃない。", NULL, "No, they weren't simply looking the other way...", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLine(NULL, "……それが、唯一の護身術だと知っていたからだ。", - NULL, " ...They knew it was the only way they could to protect themselves.", Line_Normal); + NULL, " ...They knew it was the only way they could protect themselves.", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); @@ -1933,7 +1933,7 @@ void main() OutputLine(NULL, "レナは頭でも背中でもどうでもいい。", NULL, " Rena didn't care whether it was my head or my back.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLine(NULL, "がむしゃらに何度も何度も殴りつける。", - NULL, " Zealously, she hits me again and again.", Line_Normal); + NULL, " Zealously, she hit me again and again.", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); PlaySE( 4, "wa_008", 56, 64 ); diff --git a/Update/onik_014.txt b/Update/onik_014.txt index 61db2dbf..37fba4dc 100644 --- a/Update/onik_014.txt +++ b/Update/onik_014.txt @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ void main() ClearMessage(); if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } OutputLine(NULL, "　これほどはっきりと意識が戻る目覚め方をしたのは初めてだった。", - NULL, "This was the first time I'd ever woke with such clarity.", Line_Normal); + NULL, "This was the first time I'd ever woken with such clarity.", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); //　仕掛けた目覚ましがなる直前の５時５９分＠…自身の体内時計の正確さに驚く＠ @@ -1095,7 +1095,7 @@ void main() //　敵は複数、村ぐるみ＠…祟りを妄信する村人たちは俺を助けない￥ if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } OutputLine(NULL, "　敵は複数、村ぐるみ。", - NULL, "The enemy were numerous: the whole village.", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "The enemies were numerous: the whole village.", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLine(NULL, "…祟りを妄信する村人たちは俺を助けない。", NULL, " ...The villagers with their unwavering faith in the curse would do nothing to help me.", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); @@ -2063,8 +2063,8 @@ void main() OutputLine(NULL, "「じゃあまぁ、頑張って県大会を目指してちょうだいよ。", NULL, "\"Well then, hope you make it to regionals, at least.", Line_WaitForInput); ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 3, "ps3/s01/03/120300136", 256, TRUE); - OutputLine(NULL, "おじさん、応援してるわ。」", - NULL, " This old man will cheer you on.\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); + OutputLine(NULL, "おじさん、応援してるわ。", + NULL, " This old man will cheer you on., GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } // DisableWindow(); diff --git a/Update/onik_014_02.txt b/Update/onik_014_02.txt index c8e49202..617b1e9c 100644 --- a/Update/onik_014_02.txt +++ b/Update/onik_014_02.txt @@ -2675,7 +2675,7 @@ void main() if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("圭一", NULL, "Keiichi", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 1, "ps3/s01/01/120100515", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "「レナは、悟史は“転校”したって言ってるんです。", - NULL, "\"Rena said Satoshi 'transferred' out.", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "\"Rena said Satoshi 'transferred out.'", Line_WaitForInput); ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 1, "ps3/s01/01/120100516", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "…で、俺もこのままだと“転校”しちゃうぞ、って…。」", NULL, " ...So given how things are going with me, I'll 'transfer out,' too...\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); @@ -3345,7 +3345,7 @@ void main() NULL, "\"...", Line_Continue); ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 2, "ps3/s01/02/120200263", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "なら、…仕方ないかな。」", - NULL, " Then... it can't be helped, I guess.\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); + NULL, "Then... it can't be helped, I guess.\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } @@ -4866,7 +4866,7 @@ void main() NULL, "\"That's because...", Line_WaitForInput); ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 2, "ps3/s01/02/120200312", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "……レナが。", - NULL, " Rena was...", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, " I was...", Line_WaitForInput); ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 2, "ps3/s01/02/120200313", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "圭一君の。", NULL, " right behind...", Line_WaitForInput); @@ -4906,7 +4906,7 @@ void main() if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("レナ", NULL, "Rena", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 2, "ps3/s01/02/120200317", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "「圭一くんがいろんなラーメン選んでるとこ、後ろからずっと見てたの。", - NULL, "\"When Keiichi was picking out the noodles, I was watching the entire time.", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); + NULL, "\"When Keiichi-kun was picking out the noodles, I was watching the entire time.", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } @@ -4930,7 +4930,7 @@ void main() if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("レナ", NULL, "Rena", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 2, "ps3/s01/02/120200321", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "　それで圭一くん、大好きな大きいカップの豚骨ショウガ味を選んだんだよね☆", - NULL, "Then Keiichi-kun picked out that big box of Pork-bone & Ginger flavor that he loves so much, didn't he☆?", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "Then Keiichi-kun picked out that big box of Pork-bone & Ginger flavor that you love so much, didn't you☆?", Line_WaitForInput); ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 2, "ps3/s01/02/120200322", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "　レナも好きだよ。", NULL, " I like it too...", Line_WaitForInput); diff --git a/Update/onik_015.txt b/Update/onik_015.txt index 6d9eb197..f08d4454 100644 --- a/Update/onik_015.txt +++ b/Update/onik_015.txt @@ -899,7 +899,7 @@ void main() NULL, "\"Well, it's nothing important...", Line_WaitForInput); ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 3, "ps3/s01/03/120300151", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "…お疲れのようなら後にするけど？」", - NULL, " If you're tired, I can ask again later?\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); + NULL, " If you're tired, I can ask again later.\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } @@ -3551,10 +3551,10 @@ void main() if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("レナ", NULL, "Rena", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 2, "ps3/s01/02/120200385", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "「悟史くんが“転校”しちゃった時ね、本当に後悔したんだよ。", - NULL, "\"I really regretted it when Satoshi-kun 'transferred' out.", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "\"I really regretted it when Satoshi-kun 'transferred out.'", Line_WaitForInput); ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 2, "ps3/s01/02/120200386", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "レナが相談に乗ってあげれば…悟史くんは転校せずに済んだかもしれないって。", - NULL, " I thought that if I had listened... he may not have 'transferred' out.", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, " I thought that if I had listened... he may not have 'transferred out.'", Line_WaitForInput); ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 2, "ps3/s01/02/120200387", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "すごく後悔した。」", NULL, " I really regretted that.\"", Line_Normal); @@ -3602,7 +3602,7 @@ void main() Wait( 2000 ); //　もう人が"転校"するところは見たくないの。!s200あははははははははははははは!sd。￥ OutputLine(NULL, "　もう人が“転校”するところは見たくないの。", - NULL, "I don't want to see anyone 'transfer' out again.", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); + NULL, " I don't want to see anyone 'transfer out' again.", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); //!s200 SetSpeedOfMessage( TRUE, 0, ); @@ -4383,7 +4383,7 @@ void main() NULL, " I'm probably the only one who you can confide in...", Line_WaitForInput); ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 2, "ps3/s01/02/120200431", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "……圭一くんを“転校”なんかさせないから。", - NULL, " I won't let you 'transfer' out...", Line_Continue); + NULL, " I won't let you 'transfer out'...", Line_Continue); // (backup) SetValidityOfInput( FALSE ); Wait( 1000 ); @@ -6749,7 +6749,7 @@ void main() //　レナだけが怖いから、それ以外は怖くないと...そう思い込もうとしてきた＠ if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } OutputLine(NULL, "　レナだけが怖いから、それ以外は怖くないと…そう思い込もうとしてきた。", - NULL, "I made the assumption that I didn't need fear anything else...", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); + NULL, "I made the assumption that I didn't need to fear anything else...", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } diff --git a/Update/onik_015_02.txt b/Update/onik_015_02.txt index d0b6cd23..da2a7ec2 100644 --- a/Update/onik_015_02.txt +++ b/Update/onik_015_02.txt @@ -3665,7 +3665,7 @@ void main() //　......その死は警察が確認しているはずでは...￥ if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } OutputLine(NULL, "　……その死は警察が確認しているはずでは…？", - NULL, "...The police should have confirmed that death...?", Line_Normal); + NULL, "...The police should have confirmed that death...", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); //　でもレナと魅音は確かに、監督を呼んだと言った＠ diff --git a/Update/onik_015_03.txt b/Update/onik_015_03.txt index fc1fe627..14ef00d9 100644 --- a/Update/onik_015_03.txt +++ b/Update/onik_015_03.txt @@ -256,7 +256,7 @@ void main() //　前原くんの声色から、すぐに異常事態を察する￥ if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } OutputLine(NULL, "　前原くんの声色から、すぐに異常事態を察する。", - NULL, "From the tone Maebara-kun's voice, I already knew he was in a predicament.", Line_Normal); + NULL, "From the tone of Maebara-kun's voice, I already knew he was in a predicament.", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); PlayBGM( 2, "lsys15", 56, 0 ); @@ -1490,8 +1490,8 @@ void main() //　痕跡に血液反応が出なかったことから、犯行以前に破壊したものと推定。 if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } - OutputLine(NULL, "　痕跡に血液反応が出なかったことから、犯行以前に破壊したものと推定。", - NULL, " Having no traces of blood, it is believed the destruction occurred before the murders.", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); + OutputLine(NULL, "痕跡に血液反応が出なかったことから、犯行以前に破壊したものと推定。", + NULL, "Having no traces of blood, it is believed the destruction occurred before the murders.", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); FadeOutBGM( 2, 10, TRUE ); diff --git a/Update/onik_tips_01.txt b/Update/onik_tips_01.txt index 7364c641..5ee63876 100644 --- a/Update/onik_tips_01.txt +++ b/Update/onik_tips_01.txt @@ -134,7 +134,7 @@ void main() NULL, " It's impossible to challenge me by birthday!!", Line_WaitForInput); ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 1, "org/keiichi0903", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "　……何ならひと月差ごとに１００円の賭けをしてもいいぜー！」", - NULL, " ... I wouldn't even mind you if you bet a dollar per month!\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); + NULL, " ... I wouldn't even mind you if you bet 100 yen per month!\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } diff --git a/Update/onik_tips_02.txt b/Update/onik_tips_02.txt index a3e49ce3..b51635e4 100644 --- a/Update/onik_tips_02.txt +++ b/Update/onik_tips_02.txt @@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ void main() if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("レナ", NULL, "Rena", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 2, "ps3/s20/02/440200024", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "「でもかぁいい服の方がきっと楽しいよ。……はぅ！」", - NULL, "\"But it would be so much more fun with kyute clothes... Hao!\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); + NULL, "\"But it would be so much more fun with kyute clothes... Hau!\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } diff --git a/Update/onik_tips_03.txt b/Update/onik_tips_03.txt index 3f93d255..8887eef8 100644 --- a/Update/onik_tips_03.txt +++ b/Update/onik_tips_03.txt @@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ void main() if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("圭一", NULL, "Keiichi", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 1, "ps3/s20/01/440100024", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "「１０００円。」", - NULL, "\"About $10...\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); + NULL, "\"About 1000 yen...\"", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } diff --git a/Update/onik_tips_04.txt b/Update/onik_tips_04.txt index c541208b..50c95142 100644 --- a/Update/onik_tips_04.txt +++ b/Update/onik_tips_04.txt @@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ void main() //　調べによると、６容疑者はＸＸ日午後９時頃、雛見沢ダム建設現場内の作業事務所にて＠現場監督のＸＸＸＸさんを集団で暴行して殺害し、遺体を切断して遺棄した疑い￥ if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } OutputLine(NULL, "　調べによると、６容疑者はＸＸ日午後９時頃、雛見沢ダム建設現場内の作業事務所にて、", - NULL, "According to our sources, the six suspects were at the Hinamizawa dam construction site work room on the XXth at 9PM, ", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); + NULL, "According to our sources, the six suspects were at the Hinamizawa dam construction site work room on the XXth at 9pm, ", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } OutputLine(NULL, "現場監督のＸＸＸＸさんを集団で暴行して殺害し、遺体を切断して遺棄した疑い。", NULL, "where they are suspected to have assaulted and murdered the site overseer XXXX as a group, dismembering his body and hiding it.", Line_Normal); @@ -116,10 +116,3 @@ void main() } - - - - - - - diff --git a/Update/onik_tips_07.txt b/Update/onik_tips_07.txt index 933783db..132c939c 100644 --- a/Update/onik_tips_07.txt +++ b/Update/onik_tips_07.txt @@ -416,7 +416,7 @@ void main() NULL, " Keiichi-kun and Mii-chan are an evil bailiff and...?", Line_WaitForInput); ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 2, "ps3/s20/02/440200037", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "　越後屋だよ？！」", - NULL, " a con man!?\"", Line_Normal); + NULL, " A con man!?\"", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); //「おのれ竜宮レナの助＠　ここで会ったが百年目でおじゃる＠いざ覚悟～！！＠ diff --git a/Update/onik_tips_09.txt b/Update/onik_tips_09.txt index 3351c3a3..0991b017 100644 --- a/Update/onik_tips_09.txt +++ b/Update/onik_tips_09.txt @@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ void main() //　県立白川自然公園内の展望台から２７ｍ下の渓流へ転落、行方不明になった＠ if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } OutputLine(NULL, "　ＸＸ日午後２時頃、鹿骨市雛見沢村Ｘ丁目、会社員ＸＸＸさんと妻ＸＸＸＸさんが、", - NULL, "On the afternoon of XX at 2PM, office employee XXXX and his wife XXXX of Hinamizawa village in Shishibone prefecture", Line_WaitForInput); + NULL, "On the afternoon of XX at 2pm, office employee XXXX and his wife XXXX of Hinamizawa village in Shishibone prefecture", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLine(NULL, "　県立白川自然公園内の展望台から２７ｍ下の渓流へ転落、行方不明になった。", NULL, " disappeared after falling 27 meters from the observatory platform in Shirakawa prefecture.", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ void main() //　警察と消防で下流を捜索し、同日夜７時頃、ＸＸＸさんの遺体を発見した＠ if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } OutputLine(NULL, "　警察と消防で下流を捜索し、同日夜７時頃、ＸＸＸさんの遺体を発見した。", - NULL, "Police and firefighters searched downstream and discovered the body of XXXX at around 7PM that evening.", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); + NULL, "Police and firefighters searched downstream and discovered the body of XXXX at around 7pm that evening.", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } @@ -86,7 +86,3 @@ void main() } - - - - diff --git a/Update/onik_tips_10.txt b/Update/onik_tips_10.txt index 5935a3a9..d8c14d9a 100644 --- a/Update/onik_tips_10.txt +++ b/Update/onik_tips_10.txt @@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ void main() if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine(NULL, "", NULL, "", Line_Continue); } OutputLine(NULL, "　ＸＸ日午後１０時頃、鹿骨市雛見沢村Ｘ丁目、古手神社神主のＸＸＸＸさんが不調を訴え病院で手当てを受け一時は回復したが、深夜に容態が急変、死亡した。", - NULL, "On the afternoon of XX around 10PM in the X district of Hinamizawa village in Shishibone prefecture, the shinto priest of the Furude shrine passed away after an existing condition he was recovering from suddenly worsened.", Line_Normal); + NULL, "On the afternoon of XX around 10pm in the X district of Hinamizawa village in Shishibone prefecture, the shinto priest of the Furude shrine passed away after an existing condition he was recovering from suddenly worsened.", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); @@ -68,9 +68,3 @@ void main() } - - - - - - diff --git a/Update/onik_tips_20.txt b/Update/onik_tips_20.txt index 4605ca8f..492ac047 100644 --- a/Update/onik_tips_20.txt +++ b/Update/onik_tips_20.txt @@ -147,7 +147,7 @@ void main() //どんなに視界内を探しても......レナは見つけられない＠ if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } OutputLine(NULL, "　どんなに視界内を探しても……レナは見つけられない。", - NULL, "No matter how much I search through my field of vision... I couldn't see Rena.", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); + NULL, "No matter how much I searched through my field of vision... I couldn't see Rena.", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } diff --git a/Update/zonik_004_vm00_n01.txt b/Update/zonik_004_vm00_n01.txt index 66c76d80..ab605ebe 100644 --- a/Update/zonik_004_vm00_n01.txt +++ b/Update/zonik_004_vm00_n01.txt @@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ void dialog001() //　はぁああぁッ？＠ if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } OutputLine(NULL, "　はぁああぁッ？！", - NULL, "HaouUuh!?", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); + NULL, "HaUuUu!?", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } @@ -253,7 +253,7 @@ void dialog009() //　確かに年頃の女の子が剥き身の斧を持って徘徊しているのはヤバい＠ if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } OutputLine(NULL, "　確かに年頃の女の子が剥き身の斧を持って徘徊しているのはヤバい。", - NULL, "Well, it certainly would be quite the spectacle for a girl of her age to be roaming around with a axe.", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); + NULL, "Well, it certainly would be quite the spectacle for a girl of her age to be roaming around with an axe.", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } } @@ -262,7 +262,7 @@ void dialog010() //　斧をぶんぶん振りまわしながらはしゃぐのは確かにヤバい￥ if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } OutputLine(NULL, "　斧をぶんぶん振りまわしながらはしゃぐのは確かにヤバい。", - NULL, "Somebody gallivanting about while waving a axe around certainly would seem dangerous.", Line_Normal); + NULL, "Somebody gallivanting about while waving an axe around certainly would seem dangerous.", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); @@ -282,7 +282,7 @@ void dialog011() //　この雛見沢で斧を持って徘徊しても不審に思われない唯一の人物だな…￥ if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } OutputLine(NULL, "　この雛見沢で斧を持って徘徊しても不審に思われない唯一の人物だな…。", - NULL, "She's probably the only person who could carry a axe around Hinamizawa and not be considered suspicious...", Line_Normal); + NULL, "She's probably the only person who could carry an axe around Hinamizawa and not be considered suspicious...", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); } @@ -295,7 +295,7 @@ void dialog013() //俺は今まで斧を使った事なんかない＠ if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } OutputLine(NULL, "　第一、俺は今まで斧を使った事なんかない。", - NULL, "First of all, I'd never used a axe before.", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); + NULL, "First of all, I'd never used an axe before.", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } } diff --git a/Update/zonik_004_vm0x_n01.txt b/Update/zonik_004_vm0x_n01.txt index 7b15c28f..d0ca75af 100644 --- a/Update/zonik_004_vm0x_n01.txt +++ b/Update/zonik_004_vm0x_n01.txt @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ void dialog001() //　はぁああぁッ？＠ if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } OutputLine(NULL, "　はぁああぁッ？！", - NULL, "HaouUuh!?", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); + NULL, "HaUuUu!?", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } diff --git a/Update/zonik_014_vm00_n01.txt b/Update/zonik_014_vm00_n01.txt index b63919e0..c27afff3 100644 --- a/Update/zonik_014_vm00_n01.txt +++ b/Update/zonik_014_vm00_n01.txt @@ -7,8 +7,8 @@ void dialog000() //「…県立大島が強いらしいよ＠左腕の亀田くんがすごいんだって＠…頑張ってね！＠ if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("魅音", NULL, "Mion", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 3, "ps3/s01/03/120300137", 256, TRUE); - OutputLine(NULL, "「…県立大島が強いらしいよ。", - NULL, "\"...Regionally speaking, it seems that Oshima High is pretty strong.", Line_WaitForInput); + OutputLine(NULL, "…県立大島が強いらしいよ。", + NULL, "...Regionally speaking, it seems that Oshima High is pretty strong.", Line_WaitForInput); ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 3, "ps3/s01/03/120300138", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "左腕の亀田くんがすごいんだって。", NULL, " They say their southpaw, Kameda-kun, is amazing.", Line_WaitForInput); diff --git a/Update/zonik_014_vm0x_n01.txt b/Update/zonik_014_vm0x_n01.txt index 5b366b5b..0bef3884 100644 --- a/Update/zonik_014_vm0x_n01.txt +++ b/Update/zonik_014_vm0x_n01.txt @@ -7,8 +7,8 @@ void dialog000() //「…県立大島が強いらしいよ＠左腕の亀田くんがすごいんだって＠…頑張ってね！＠ if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLine("魅音", NULL, "Mion", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 3, "ps3/s01/03/120300137", 256, TRUE); - OutputLine(NULL, "「…野球部の強い高校、教えよっか？", - NULL, "\"...Want me to tell you the best high schools for baseball?", Line_WaitForInput); + OutputLine(NULL, "…野球部の強い高校、教えよっか？", + NULL, "...Want me to tell you the best high schools for baseball?", Line_WaitForInput); ModPlayVoiceLS(3, 3, "ps3/s01/03/120300138", 256, TRUE); OutputLine(NULL, "そこにいる左腕の、亀田くんがすごいピッチャーなんだけどさ。", NULL, " See Kameda-kun over there? He's a southpaw and an amazing pitcher.", Line_WaitForInput); diff --git a/Update/zonik_tips_20_vm00_n01.txt b/Update/zonik_tips_20_vm00_n01.txt index 61a85bf2..8f02e20c 100644 --- a/Update/zonik_tips_20_vm00_n01.txt +++ b/Update/zonik_tips_20_vm00_n01.txt @@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ void dialog002() if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { OutputLineAll("", NULL, Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } OutputLine(NULL, "　手早く目当てのラーメンの箱を探しに行く。", - NULL, "I quickly search the cases of noodles for what I want.", Line_Normal); + NULL, "I quickly searched the cases of noodles for what I wanted.", Line_Normal); ClearMessage(); diff --git a/Update/zonik_tips_20_vm0x_n01.txt b/Update/zonik_tips_20_vm0x_n01.txt index b8b3f71b..bb507546 100644 --- a/Update/zonik_tips_20_vm0x_n01.txt +++ b/Update/zonik_tips_20_vm0x_n01.txt @@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ void dialog002() OutputLine(NULL, "　列も長くないし、時間はない……。", NULL, "The line is short, and there isn't much time...!", Line_WaitForInput); OutputLine(NULL, "俺は仕方なく、手早く目当てのラーメンの箱を探しに行く。", - NULL, " Left with no choice, I quickly search the cases of noodles for what I want.", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); + NULL, " Left with no choice, I quickly searched the cases of noodles for what I wanted.", GetGlobalFlag(GLinemodeSp)); if (GetGlobalFlag(GADVMode)) { ClearMessage(); } else { OutputLineAll(NULL, "\n", Line_ContinueAfterTyping); } // 困ったときには、……そう！　豚骨ショウガ味の大盛カップ！！